Allison DeLauer

Allison DeLauer

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  • Allison DeLauer
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    April 28, 2022 at 8:10 pm in reply to: My Father’s Smile by Beth Larssen #12609

    Just wanted to chime in along with the others that the “NO!” turn is particularly compelling. The warmth of this text is heart-felt. Thanks for sharing it!

  • Allison DeLauer
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    April 28, 2022 at 8:06 pm in reply to: Memory, by Mary Elizabeth Moore #12608

    I enjoy the visceral wooden pins, saltines, umbrellas… Also the double work of the wash/ awash– this echo in subsequent stanzas from outside object, to inner reflection. The separate locations are vivid. Thank you for sharing it.

  • Allison DeLauer
    Participant
    April 28, 2022 at 3:38 pm in reply to: Vestigial Heart #12606

    Thanks Cristina! I appreciate your feedback.

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